9月24日雅思動(dòng)態(tài)圖范文:英國不同年齡群女性生育率

9月24日雅思動(dòng)態(tài)圖范文:英國不同年齡群女性生育率

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the changes in UK’s birth rate for women in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

注：圖形根據(jù)考場回憶繪制，具體細(xì)節(jié)或有出入。

【圖形分類】

動(dòng)態(tài)圖

【題目解析】

圖表給出的是生育率的變化，也叫作fertility rates，是統(tǒng)計(jì)每一千個(gè)女性中會(huì)生育多少個(gè)孩子的數(shù)據(jù)。注意并不是百分比，而是千分比。

在圖中可以發(fā)現(xiàn)，如果按照變化趨勢，30-35，20-25以及35-39總體是下降的，而25-30以及under 20是上升的，40 and above則是基本穩(wěn)定。從數(shù)據(jù)大小來看，35-39的數(shù)據(jù)始終是最高的，而40 and above則始終是最低的。

【寫作思路】

開頭段：轉(zhuǎn)述題目

總結(jié)：在35-39，25-30和20以下的女性在2008年相比于其他組有更高的生育率，尤其是25-30和20以下這兩個(gè)組，是唯二數(shù)值上升的組。

主體段1：35-39的女性有最高的生育率，數(shù)值從80每1000下降到70。30-35和20-25歲的女性的生育率也下降，一個(gè)是顯著下降一個(gè)是少量下降。

主體段2：25-30和20以下的女性在1973年的生育大概是58和35每1000，排名第三和第五，但是都快速上升成為第二和第三名。40歲以上的女性最不太可能生育，數(shù)值始終最低并且穩(wěn)定在10%。

【參考范文】

The line graph illustrates how the fertility rates changed by age groups during 35 years from 1973 to 2008.

Overall,compared with other age groups,women ages 35-39,25-30 and under 20 had higher fertility rates in 2008,and the latter two were also the only groups that experienced a rising trend in their figures.

Specifically,women ages 35-39 always had the highest rates,yet declining from about 80 to 70 per 1000 women despite some fluctuation in the period.The decreasing trend could also be seen in the groups of 30-35 and 20-25,with a significant and a slight drop respectively to 40‰and 30‰.

However,for women ages 25-30 and under 20,there were approximately 58 and 35 births per 1000 women in 1973,ranking the third and fifth position.After a slight drop,the figures went up sharply to 65‰and 60‰,becoming the second and third highest in the end.It is notable that women over 40 years old were least likely to give birth,with the lowest rate stabilizing at 10‰over the 35 years.

(180 words)

【語言積累】

Fertility rate n.生育率

Women ages 35-39此處ages是較為常見的表示某年齡段女性的說法

Give birth生孩子

Despite盡管

Rank排名

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