雅思大作文范文：媒體中限制報道犯罪行為細節(jié)

雅思大作文范文：媒體中限制報道犯罪行為細節(jié)

雅思大作文題目：

Some people think that the detailed description of crimes on newspapers and TV has bad consequences,so this kind of information should be restricted in the media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【話題分類】：媒體類

【題目解析】：

題目大意：一些人認為報紙和電視上對于犯罪行為的細節(jié)描述有負面的影響，因此這樣的信息在媒體中應該被限制。在何種程度上同意這個觀點？

題型特點：需明確表明對觀點的態(tài)度；同時，題目中有一部分信息是觀點的原因，對犯罪行為的細節(jié)描述有負面影響，對這部分信息不能忽略了回應，可以跟主體段證明應該被限制放在一起回應。

本文論文推進：開頭引出當下關于媒體的爭議，以及題目中的觀點，表明自己立場。中間段先分析為何此類信息需要被限制，接著用讓步的方式承認一些媒體上此類信息有一定好處，但過于細節(jié)的是需要限制的。結尾總結論點，重申觀點。

難點：這道題容易讓考生糾結限制的程度問題，建議同學們針對題目給出的關鍵信息detailed description進行回應，即觀點是‘限制媒體上對于犯罪細節(jié)的描述’，而不是完全不對犯罪信息進行報道。

【寫作思路】：

開頭段：當下媒體自由度較高，對犯罪的報道也越來越豐富。有人擔心此類細節(jié)的報道會產生不良后果，應該被限制。個人觀點表示同意。

主體第一段：之所以應該限制這一類細節(jié)描述，有幾大原因。受到最大影響的是犯罪的受害者，報道過于細節(jié)，會加重他們的身心創(chuàng)傷，甚至侵犯隱私。而對普通大眾來說也無益，細節(jié)描述含有過于血腥暴力的內容，不僅引起不適，也讓人擔憂對年輕人的影響。三是對于一些潛在的犯罪份子，這些細節(jié)報道可能會給他們提供信息支持，刺激和慫恿了犯罪行為。

主體第二段：當然，適度的報道有正向作用，也有人認為在報紙和電視上對犯罪進行一定程度的報道能夠讓大眾增強安全意識，了解犯罪份子的行為模式，改善保護措施，避免成為受害者。但報道的內容應當進行充分審查，進行關鍵的說明即可，細節(jié)的報道是沒有必要的。

結尾段：總的來說，基于對群眾和犯罪率的影響，犯罪的細節(jié)描述是需要受到審查和限制的,雖然報紙和電視有協(xié)助大眾提高防范意識的責任。

【參考范文】

Increased degree of freedom in media reports has allowed exposure of crime cases to come forth in a detailed manner,which certainly arouses a great deal of concern.In light of this,some people believe there should be restrictions on such information.From my perspective,I agree that censorship should be imposed on the descriptions of crime.

There are several reasons why the focus of newspapers and television on high-profile crimes should be more carefully regulated.The group most affected by the news media's coverage of violence and victimization is crime victims.This is because media coverage that is sometimes viewed as insensitive,voyeuristic,and uncaring can largely violate victims’privacy and inflict their emotional and psychological suffering.Not only that,the general public seldom benefits from this exposure to crime details.In fact,these descriptions can not only cause discomfort but also arouse apprehension about the impacts on young people.Besides,it is likely that potential offenders would be instigated and incited to commit crimes,since they might regard detailed media coverage as a form of guidance.

It is undeniable that the coverage of crime cases can be helpful and,in some cases,even healing.Some would also suggest that the media have the obligation to keep the public well informed about trends in crime.Indeed,the media play a significant role in public safety by keeping citizens apprised of essential information on criminal affairs,such as new patterns of fraud,ways to assist victims and measures to prevent crime.However,the extent to which the media can cover about these cases should be censored carefully by avoiding excessively detailed descriptions,so that they can accurately cover crime stories with the least amount of trauma to the victim and negative repercussions on the public.

In conclusion,although newspapers and television need to raise the public awareness of key information on crime cases,I contend that restrictions should be imposed on excessive descriptions of details,in order to mitigate the detrimental consequences.

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【亮點詞匯及短語】

1.degree of freedom自由度

2.exposure(n.)曝光，暴露，揭發(fā)

3.come forth出現(xiàn)，涌現(xiàn)

4.in a detailed manner以一種細節(jié)的方式

5.censorship(n.)審查制度

6.impose(v.)施加

7.high-profile(adj.)高調的，受到關注的

8.coverage(n.)報道

9.crime victim犯罪受害者

10.insensitive(adj.)不友好的

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