8月21日雅思大作文范文解析：科研應該靠政府還是私企

8月21日雅思大作文范文解析：科研應該靠政府還是私企

Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文及解析

Introduction

As an integral part of the well-being of mankind,scientific experiments are usually suggested to be conducted and managed by administration,yet I entertain the view that the private sector should also be involved.

【解析】老題重現(xiàn)。scientific research的范圍比較廣，可以考慮從科研涉及的不同領域，以及政府和公司這兩個群體的本質差別去進行各自合理性的探討。

Body 1

Behind government’s efforts are several merits,among which the most conspicuous one is that some money-consuming research yet without immediate value can be performed by corridors of power.To illustrate,some large-scale missions,such as inventing a spacecraft with a high level of accuracy,precision and sophistication,often require an input of colossal amounts of budgets,which may be beyond the reach of most individual or private organisations,and the absence of foreseeable profits may also incur little incentive for them.//Besides,studies in certain domains,especially national defence and military,should be implemented by government in case money-driven businesses may compromise principles and leak research findings for the sake of raking in profits,thus posing a threat to national security.

【解析】政府負責科研的好處顯而易見：資金比較充裕，且通常會投資帶來長遠好處而非眼前盈利的項目，有些機密性質的領域由政府掌控，也能防止信息外泄。

?accuracy n.<U>準確度

?precision n.<U>精確度

?sophistication n.<U>精密度

?colossal adj.巨大的

?be beyond the reach of超出…的能力范圍

?compromise vt.放棄（原則），在…方面妥協(xié)

?leak vt.透露，泄露（秘密）

?rake in大量斂集（錢財）

Body 2

However,never does this mean that private companies should be barred from carrying out scientific studies.As a matter of fact,there are evident gains for firms to get involved as well.More accurately,targeted at holding a share in the market and making more money,private businesses have every reason to refine the processing and develop new products at a rather low cost by conducting various scientific researches.Under such motivation,their working efficiency and productivity will be enhanced.//Additionally,it is because private enterprises are market-oriented that they are more likely to develop inventions with more pragmatic value so as to cater to customers’needs.

【解析】其余一些領域的科研可以放手讓公司實施，利益驅使之下反而高效多產(chǎn)。

?bar sb.from doing sth.阻止某人做某事

?refine vt.精煉

Conclusion

In a nutshell,authorities and private firms should be engaged in scientific research in diverse fields.

【解析】重申觀點

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