雅思大作文范文：更多人選擇獨(dú)居對(duì)社會(huì)是好是壞

雅思大作文范文：更多人選擇獨(dú)居對(duì)社會(huì)是好是壞

雅思大作文題目：

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In some countries,more people choose to live by themselves in recent years.

Why is this the case?

Is it a positive or negative development for society?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

社會(huì)生活類

【題目解析】

題目大意：在一些國家，更多人選擇獨(dú)居。其原因是什么？對(duì)社會(huì)是一個(gè)積極還是消極影響。

考生需要注意，這個(gè)題目問的是對(duì)“社會(huì)”的影響。

該題屬于“two-question essay”，要求考生回答兩個(gè)問題，故文章結(jié)構(gòu)需要四段，即1）題目改寫+簡要回答題目兩個(gè)問題，2）回答第一個(gè)問題（2個(gè)點(diǎn)），3）回答第二個(gè)問題（2個(gè)點(diǎn)），4）總結(jié)段（總結(jié)主體兩個(gè)段落的要點(diǎn)）。

原因：1）人們想要更多私人空間，2）與家人相處困難

消極：1）房價(jià)上升，2）社會(huì)缺少有合作意識(shí)的人才

【寫作思路】

Para 1=題目改寫+簡要回答題目兩個(gè)問題

Para 2=主體1（兩個(gè)原因）

原因1：人們想要更多私人空間

原因2：與家人相處困難

Para 3=主體2（兩個(gè)負(fù)面影響）

解決辦法1：房價(jià)上升

解決辦法2：社會(huì)缺少有合作意識(shí)的人才

Para 4=總結(jié)段

【參考范文】

In a large number of nations,there has been a dramatic increase in the number of people who tend to lead an independent lifestyle.This essay will initially outline the causes of this phenomenon,followed by a presentation of evidence to support my firm conviction that it is an adverse trend.

There are primarily two factors behind people’s tendency to live solitarily.To begin with,people expect more private space.Some are interested in reading books and writing stories,while others have a passion for singing or composing music pieces.However,if they live with their family,they will be disturbed frequently,preventing them from enjoying their time.Furthermore,some individuals fail to get along well with their family members.Young people,for instance,have formed the habit of sleeping late and waking up late,which is thought of as an extremely unhealthy lifestyle by their parents.This makes the younger generation move out,and those who secure a stable economic source will buy their own property independently.

In my opinion,this trend is detrimental to the wider community.The first point to consider is that living a solitary life may lead to a rise in housing prices.This is mainly because the more people choose to live on their own,the more houses are required.As a result,demand will exceed supply,which entails people spending more on rent and mortgages.In addition,society may lack talents who have developed teamwork and social skills.When living alone for a long time,people might rarely communicate with others,becoming isolated and emotionally immature as well as unwilling to cooperate with others.

In conclusion,individuals’pursuit of more privacy and their poor relationship with their families are the two major reasons for them to live independently.However,I strongly believe it is not wise to encourage people to live by themselves.For one thing,housing prices will rise considerably;for another,society may suffer from a dearth of people without collaborative abilities.

【亮點(diǎn)詞匯及短語】

1.a dramatic increase劇烈上升

2.lead an independent lifestyle獨(dú)居

3.live solitarily獨(dú)居

4.private space私人空間

5.have a passion for對(duì)…有熱情

6.composing music pieces寫音樂

7.be disturbed被打擾

8.prevent…from防止…

9.fail to do不能做

10.get along well with與…相處好

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