雅思大作文范文：因魅力財(cái)富知名的人樹(shù)立不好榜樣

雅思大作文范文：因魅力財(cái)富知名的人樹(shù)立不好榜樣

雅思大作文題目：

Nowadays,there are many celebrities who are famous for their glamour and wealth rather than achievements.This is a bad example for young people.To what extent do you agree with this statement?

【話題分類】：社會(huì)生活類

【題目解析】：

題目大意：當(dāng)今許多名人因?yàn)轺攘拓?cái)富而知名，卻并非由于成就，這給年輕人樹(shù)立了不好的榜樣。你在何種程度上同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)？

題型特點(diǎn)：對(duì)觀點(diǎn)需要表明清晰的立場(chǎng)；但該題目觀點(diǎn)包含了兩部分內(nèi)容，“前提”與“觀點(diǎn)”，考生可能會(huì)在如何回應(yīng)題目時(shí)，產(chǎn)生混淆，想到的思路太多，反而不知從何下手。

【難點(diǎn)】

本題主要在立論和對(duì)題目?jī)刹糠钟^點(diǎn)的態(tài)度上，容易讓考生搖擺。

建議：請(qǐng)各位考生先明確，寫作的目標(biāo)是“能清晰的表明立場(chǎng)，有理有據(jù)的證明”。

這里給各位分享幾種不同的觀點(diǎn)，和論證思路，在這道題目中都是可行的。

1.觀點(diǎn)完全同意。開(kāi)頭引出現(xiàn)象，表明立場(chǎng)。中間用2-3個(gè)論點(diǎn)結(jié)合論據(jù)，證明這樣的名人現(xiàn)象對(duì)年輕人有哪些不好的榜樣作用。結(jié)尾重申觀點(diǎn)。

2.觀點(diǎn)完全同意。開(kāi)頭引出現(xiàn)象，表明立場(chǎng)。中間第一段證明這種現(xiàn)象的不利影響，第二段讓步雖然這種現(xiàn)象對(duì)年輕人也有激勵(lì)，因?yàn)楸砻鞒蔀槊说拈T檻降低。但終究傳遞了走捷徑便可成功的價(jià)值觀，并不值得提倡。結(jié)尾重申觀點(diǎn)。

3.觀點(diǎn)部分同意。開(kāi)頭引出現(xiàn)象，表明“雖然因魅力和財(cái)富出名的名人現(xiàn)象對(duì)年輕人有不好的影響，但不乏能樹(shù)立正面榜樣的名人?！爸虚g第一段證明題目中的現(xiàn)象所帶來(lái)的負(fù)面效應(yīng)，第二段轉(zhuǎn)折表明有一些因真正的成就而知名的名人，他們帶來(lái)了積極作用。結(jié)尾重申觀點(diǎn)“題目中這類現(xiàn)象確實(shí)是不好的例子，年輕人應(yīng)當(dāng)更關(guān)注更為有能力的名人?！?/p>

4.觀點(diǎn)部分同意。開(kāi)頭引出現(xiàn)象，表明“雖然名人對(duì)粉絲影響巨大，但其影響本質(zhì)上取決于受眾如何理解，所以不能完全認(rèn)為是他們樹(shù)立了不好的榜樣?！爸虚g第一段證明一些負(fù)面影響是真實(shí)可見(jiàn)的，第二段表明這些負(fù)面效應(yīng)并不完全由這些名人導(dǎo)致。結(jié)尾重申觀點(diǎn)“的確名人效應(yīng)很大程度上影響著年輕人，但不能全然認(rèn)為是他們樹(shù)立的不好的榜樣?！?/p>

以上四種立論，都能做到清晰回答題目的問(wèn)題。但從邏輯論證的難度來(lái)講，1、2、3對(duì)于考生來(lái)說(shuō)，更容易展開(kāi)和講清楚。

*本次范文以思路2為例。

【寫作思路】：

開(kāi)頭段：當(dāng)今大家成名更多是由于財(cái)富和個(gè)人魅力，而非職業(yè)成就。一些人認(rèn)為這給現(xiàn)在年輕人樹(shù)立了不合適的榜樣。我很贊同他們的觀點(diǎn)。

主體第一段：這種趨勢(shì)影響了：1）年輕一代的日常生活，可能養(yǎng)成奢侈的模式。2）年輕人的思維方式，可能認(rèn)為很容易就可以成名。

主體第二段：雖然一些人認(rèn)為這不一定是壞事，因?yàn)槌擅拈T檻降低后，年輕人會(huì)認(rèn)為比之前更容易成功。但當(dāng)今的名人文化傳遞的價(jià)值觀念讓年輕人只看到了名利虛妄的一面，卻忽視努力的重要性。

結(jié)尾段：總的來(lái)說(shuō)，這種價(jià)值觀會(huì)對(duì)年輕人造成負(fù)面影響。

【參考范文】

These days,celebrities are making headlines more for their glamour and their fortune than their professional accomplishments,which in some people's opinion,sets unsuitable role models for the young generation.I personally agree with their perspective.

The adverse influences of this worldwide trend penetrate into young people's daily life as well as their mindset.When celebrities are only noted for being rich and attractive,children and young adults who adore them are likely to form an extravagant lifestyle,because they sometimes follow their role models blindly.In their quest to live like idols,youngsters often imitate the flashy lifestyles–fast cars,expensive jewelry and designer clothes.On a deeper level,this fascination with appearance and wealth sends out a misleading message to today's young generation,promoting the idea that hard work and perseverance are less significant,and that success can be achieved easily.

Some would argue that it is not entirely a bad thing when celebrities are known for their material possessions and glamourous images,because it means that the barrier to fame has been lowered.In this case,young people seem to find success more attainable than it used to be.However,today's celebrity culture teaches the youth that being a successful person is about little more than having an eye-catching profile.It teaches them to cut corners in order to achieve fame,and to boast about it once they have succeeded.In light of this,they only see the superficial side of fame and possibly do not understand or appreciate the efforts that make one successful.

To sum up,young individuals can be negatively influenced by vacuous celebrities whose fame is predicated upon very little achievement but image and fortune,since they deliver a set of value that would deteriorate the young generation.

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【亮點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ)】

1.make headlines成為頭條

2.professional accomplishment職業(yè)成就

3.adverse adj.負(fù)面的

4.be noted for因…知名

5.extravagant adj.奢侈的

6.blindly adj.盲目的

7.in one's quest to在追求…的過(guò)程中

8.designer clothes名牌服裝

9.on a deeper level在更深的層次上

10.send out a message傳遞一個(gè)信息

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