12月24日雅思寫作task1回憶:中國石油生產(chǎn)和消耗情況對比

12月24日雅思寫作task1回憶:中國石油生產(chǎn)和消耗情況對比

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

*圖形根據(jù)考場回憶，具體信息略有出入

注：圖形根據(jù)考場回憶繪制，具體細節(jié)或有出入。

【圖形分類】

線形圖

【題目解析】

根據(jù)圖中信息，可以如下布局：

開頭段：轉(zhuǎn)述題目；

綜述段：歸納兩條趨勢之間的異同；

主體段1：介紹第一階段的數(shù)據(jù)特征（區(qū)別有限）；

主體段2：介紹第二階段的數(shù)據(jù)特征（差距增大）。

【寫作思路】

開頭段：該圖提供了一個東方國家在25年間的石油產(chǎn)量和消耗量信息。

綜述段：總的來說，兩個類別都有上升的趨勢，盡管消耗的上升幅度更大。

主體段1：最初的十年，這兩種趨勢之間相對平衡。具體而言，兩者早在1982年都處于每天200萬桶的水平，屬于最低記錄。4年后，生產(chǎn)能力提高了50%，一直持續(xù)到1994年。這時，它被消耗量超過，而消耗量是在1990年后才開始增長的。

主體段2：上述的生產(chǎn)赤字在隨后幾年里進一步擴大。這時，由于對石油的需求不斷增加，在2006年急劇攀升到每天600多萬桶，比1982年的數(shù)字大三倍。相反，這種強勁勢頭超出該國的產(chǎn)能提升，因為在同一時期，產(chǎn)量只增加了50萬桶。這意味著，到2006年為止，產(chǎn)量不足（每天200多萬桶）的情況已經(jīng)大大惡化。

【參考范文】

The chart provides information about how much oil was output and used in an oriental country over the course of 25 years.

In general,there were upward trends in both categories,although more substantially in the case of consumption.

The initial decade saw a relative balance between the two trends.More specifically,both started at 2 million barrels per day in 1982,the lowest level recorded.This was followed by a 50%rise in the production capacity 4 years later,which continued at the same level until 1994.This was when it was surpassed by consumption,which had only started to grow after 1990.

The production deficit reported above further widened over the subsequent years.Here,due to an increasing demand for oil,there was a steep climb to over 6 million barrels per day in 2006,three times larger than the 1982 figure.Such growth momentum,on the other hand,was not matched by the country’s production,as it only rose by 0.5 million barrels over the same period.This means that by 2006,insufficient supply(over 2 million barrels per day)had worsened substantially.

(186 words)

【語言積累】

1.output(v.)產(chǎn)出

2.upward trends上升趨勢

3.categories類別

4.a relative balance相對平衡

5.production capacity產(chǎn)能

6.surpass超越

7.production deficit產(chǎn)能不足

8.a steep climb急劇攀升

9.growth momentum增長勢頭

10.insufficient supply供給短缺

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