1月14日雅思寫作task1回憶:英國鋼鐵需求產(chǎn)量出口及員工數(shù)據(jù)

1月14日雅思寫作task1回憶:英國鋼鐵需求產(chǎn)量出口及員工數(shù)據(jù)

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graphs below show the production of and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

*圖形根據(jù)考場回憶，具體信息略有出入

注：圖形根據(jù)考場回憶繪制，具體細(xì)節(jié)或有出入。

【圖形分類】

線圖（多圖）

【題目解析】

題目中兩幅圖，都是線圖，即可以確定本文需要使用“動(dòng)態(tài)圖語言”進(jìn)行寫作。題目是2010年的數(shù)據(jù)，故全文需要使用過去時(shí)態(tài)。

【寫作思路】

Para 1=題目改寫+概述

Para 2=描寫第一幅圖內(nèi)容（鋼鐵生產(chǎn)及需求量）

Para 3=描寫第二幅圖內(nèi)容（鋼鐵業(yè)工人數(shù)量）

【參考范文】

The line graphs illustrate the amount of steel produced and needed as well as how many employees were hired in 2010 in Britain.Overall,the production of steel was more than the demand for it during the year except for December;meanwhile,the number of workers employed experienced a decreasing trend.

Starting with the production of and demand for steel,4,000 million tonnes were produced in January and then the amount increased to 5,000 million before dropping back to the January figure in March.After that,the number stabilised for four months but decreased to approximately 3,500 million in August.Following this,there was a significant decline in the quantity prior to it plugging to just under 1,000 million in December.Regarding the demand,only 2,000 million were produced in January,followed by a moderate rise to 3,000 million in March.Over the next eight months,the figure fluctuated,reaching roughly 10 million in November.Interestingly,the quantity overtook that of production in December,at 2,000 million.

Turning to the employees,5,000 people worked in this industry at the beginning of 2010.Although the number was around 5,500 in February,a rapid fall to about 2,800 in July was seen.After that,there was a slight increase in the figure in August,at approximately 3,500,but it went down significantly to merely 1,000 at the end.

(226 words)

【亮點(diǎn)詞匯及短語】

1.produce(v.)生產(chǎn)

2.employee(n.)員工

3.hire(v.)雇傭

4.experience a decreasing trend下降

5.drop(v.)下降

6.approximately(adv.)大約

7.plunge(v.)下降

8.just under大約

9.a moderate rise輕微上升

10.fluctuate(v.)波動(dòng)

11.roughly(adv.)大約

12.overtake(v.)超過

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