雅思大作文范文：保持健康是社會責(zé)任而不是個(gè)人利益

2023-05-23 10:55:06 來源：中國教育在線

雅思大作文范文：保持健康是社會責(zé)任而不是個(gè)人利益

雅思大作文題目：

People should look after their health as a duty to the society where they live,rather than for their own benefits.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【話題分類】

社會生活類

【題目解析】

題目大意：有人認(rèn)為人們應(yīng)該將保持健康作為一種社會責(zé)任，而不是個(gè)人的利益。你在何種程度上同意上述觀點(diǎn)？

難點(diǎn)：本題話題很大眾，但由于太過于‘顯而易見’，題目二選一的觀點(diǎn)模式讓同學(xué)們反而不知如何下手。

解決：題目可以一邊倒，或折中。對于題目觀點(diǎn)，不必完全贊同或完全反對。

【寫作思路】

開頭段：人們對健康的關(guān)注是很普遍的，大部分人是為了個(gè)人的利益保持健康。但有人認(rèn)為這應(yīng)該是一種社會責(zé)任。我認(rèn)為人們從個(gè)人利益出發(fā)去維系健康是無可厚非的，但需要越來越多的人意識到個(gè)體健康對社會確實(shí)有深遠(yuǎn)的影響。

主體第一段：對大部分人來說，從個(gè)人利益出發(fā)保持健康完全合理。健康在大部分時(shí)候只影響了個(gè)人的生活或工作等；人們可以因?yàn)楦鞣N各樣的個(gè)人原因去維護(hù)自己的健康。因此只要人們在通過各種途徑保持健康狀態(tài)，就沒有必要要求每個(gè)人去看到更高的格局。

主體第二段：然而，更多的人應(yīng)當(dāng)意識到健康對社會的影響。個(gè)體健康應(yīng)當(dāng)作為社會責(zé)任的原因：1）確保社會生產(chǎn)力；2）減少疾病蔓延，減少財(cái)政壓力；

結(jié)尾段：總而言之，只要人們在重視自己的健康，這對每個(gè)人和社會都會有積極的影響。我個(gè)人認(rèn)為確實(shí)需要更多的人認(rèn)識到健康的社會價(jià)值。

【參考范文】

In his book Homo Sapiens,Yuval Noah Harari regarded long-term health and happiness as humankind’s next agenda,which is confirmed by the prevailing public concern about personal well-being.Most people endeavor to maintain good health conditions in pursuit of personal benefits,whereas some suggest that individual well-being should be considered as social obligation.From my perspective,while both purposes are justifiable,more people should realize the social value of being healthy.

For the majority,taking care of their health condition is merely a personal matter,which is completely reasonable,because in most scenarios,the well-being of an individual only affects the person’s life after all.Motivated by personal interests,such as a longer life span,the improvement in financial status,or even better appearance,individuals would make great effort to keep themselves healthy,both physically and mentally.The ideology of individualism seems perfectly undoubtable,as long as the public is taking their health issue seriously.

However,people should see the bigger picture of being healthy and appreciate its influences on the society.On the one hand,when members of the society enjoy good health conditions,it ensures the societal productivity in general.It can be said that all functioning sectors,including national defense,education systems,social services and so forth,largely count on the well-being of the people.On the other hand,the society would suffer a great deal when individuals are unhealthy.An ill person with a contagious disease can easily become a threat to a large crowd,leading to the outbreak of epidemics.The pandemic Covid-19 has shown how the reckless behaviors of any individual can cause major health concerns over the world.

To conclude,regardless of incentives,both individuals and the society would benefit when people try to maintain their health.Having acknowledged that,if mankind were to fulfill the next agenda of long-term well-being,more people would need to consider their health as a public matter that relates to the whole society,instead of merely a personal issue.

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【亮點(diǎn)詞匯及短語】

1.long-term health長期健康

2.agenda n.議題

3.prevailing adj.普遍的，流行的

4.personal well-being個(gè)人健康，個(gè)人幸福

5.endeavor to努力去…

6.in pursuit of為了追求…

7.social obligation社會責(zé)任

8.justifiable adj.合理的

9.social value社會價(jià)值

10.scenario n.場景