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雅思議論性題目寫作的五大技巧

2024-08-04 12:31:01 來(lái)源:中國(guó)教育在線

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雅思議論性題目寫作的五大技巧

雅思議論性題目寫作的五大技巧

技巧一、避免使用語(yǔ)意弱的be動(dòng)詞。

1、把句中的表語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換為不同的修飾語(yǔ)。

這個(gè)技巧并不是那么容易掌握,但是確實(shí)是一個(gè)能夠提高雅思寫組成績(jī)的非常實(shí)用的技巧。

例如:

Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定語(yǔ))

Or:The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (轉(zhuǎn)換為并列結(jié)構(gòu)作后置定語(yǔ))

2、將作表語(yǔ)用的形容詞或名詞變?yōu)樾袨閯?dòng)詞。

例如:1) Weak:The team members are good players.

Revision:The team members play well.

2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

3、在以here或there開頭的句子中,把be動(dòng)詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語(yǔ)。

例如:

1) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.

Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.

Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.

技巧二、多用語(yǔ)意具體的動(dòng)詞,保持句意簡(jiǎn)潔明了。

這樣的具體描寫可以讓文章看起來(lái)更具說(shuō)服力,當(dāng)然也就可以提高雅思寫作成績(jī)了。

例如:

1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.

Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.

Better:She compares prices and quality.

技巧三、盡量運(yùn)用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。

之所以要這樣做,是因?yàn)楹芏嗳瞬幻靼资裁磿r(shí)候該用主動(dòng),什么時(shí)候該用被動(dòng)。用錯(cuò)了,當(dāng)然也就談不上提高雅思寫作成績(jī)了。

例如:

1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.

Better:Charity has supported the organization.

2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

  技巧四、防止使用語(yǔ)意冗長(zhǎng)累贅的詞語(yǔ)。

想要提高雅思寫作成績(jī)就得使寫作的用詞簡(jiǎn)單,生動(dòng)。

例如:

1、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

2、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

技巧五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語(yǔ)或難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)。

這是語(yǔ)言考試,不是專業(yè)考試,提高雅思寫作成績(jī)的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)在語(yǔ)言上,是文章的表現(xiàn)力上!

例如:

1、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

Improved:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

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