2022年5月21日雅思大作文范文:每個(gè)人擁有家電和汽車的利弊

2022年5月21日雅思大作文范文

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

It has been suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a car, a TV, and a fridge.

Do you think the advantages of such a development outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【話題分類】

社會(huì)類

【題目解析】

題目大意：研究表明每個(gè)人都想用于一臺(tái)私家車、電視機(jī)和冰箱。題目要求考生表達(dá)“這個(gè)趨勢(shì)優(yōu)點(diǎn)是否大于缺點(diǎn)”。

這個(gè)題目屬于“優(yōu)劣勢(shì)題型”中“outweigh”類型，故考生需要明確表達(dá)“優(yōu)大于劣”或“劣大于優(yōu)”的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)使用2:1的方式進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。

筆者認(rèn)為“優(yōu)大于劣”，故主體段3段，寫(xiě)兩個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)和一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)。

考生需要注意的是，在讓步段中不能寫(xiě)“反駁”，因?yàn)橐粋€(gè)段落有且只有一個(gè)中心。

【寫(xiě)作思路】

Para 1 = 題目改寫(xiě) + 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)（優(yōu)大于劣）

Para 2 = 優(yōu)點(diǎn)1

Para 3 = 優(yōu)點(diǎn)2

Para 4 = 缺點(diǎn)1

Para 5 = 重申觀點(diǎn) + 總結(jié)主體3個(gè)段中的理由

【參考范文】

Nowadays, each individual desires to have various products, such as a private vehicle, a television set, and a refrigerator. Personally, I am inclined to the view that the merits of this trend prevail over the downsides.

The major benefit is that people can have an easy and enjoyable life. If they possess a car, they can freely reach destinations where public transport is unavailable. Using a refrigerator allows them to store foods for days, preventing unnecessary waste, and meanwhile makes it possible for people to have cold beverages on scorching summer days. Watching television programmes helps people unwind after they have been working or studying all day.

Another advantage is that the economy will be boosted. With the increasing demand for a range of products, a considerable number of workers are required for mass manufacturing, which creates many job vacancies and increases the employment rate. More excise taxes will also be generated when more products are purchased, which becomes a vital source of government revenue, and the authorities can make use of the money to stimulate a wider variety of business activities.

However, the disadvantages are also obvious, one of which is that environmental degradation can be a public concern. At the production phase, excessive quantities of raw materials, including trees and rubber, will be unsustainably exploited. Irresponsible factories may also discharge contaminated unprocessed water into waterways and emit toxic gases to pollute the air. At the disposal stage, these products will more or less pose a threat to nature no matter how they are dealt with.

In conclusion, I believe there are more positive influences than negative ones if everyone owns a car and other appliances. Despite the damage that using and disposing of these products may cause to the environment, people will be assisted to lead their lives in an easy fashion and an economic growth can be achieved.

(311 words)

>> 雅思 托福 免費(fèi)測(cè)試、量身規(guī)劃、讓英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)不再困難<<