托?？谡Z范文：全球互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的普及如何改變了人們的生活?

托?？谡Z范文：全球互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的普及如何改變了人們的生活?

托福獨立口語高頻話題

Describe a day that you enjoy the most or is the most special to you.

學(xué)生對此話題的表述答案

I still remember the day I got my college entrance exam result.That day is very special for me,most importantly,that's because it's a good proof that allthe hard work in my high school is deserved.I have worked more than 15 hours a day in the last year of my junior high.It's very tireless and exhausted to me,but I insisted it and I finally got the good score,what's more,I think it is also means I will have a very bright future,because I can go to the best university in our country.That would give me a better chance to find a good job.

批改意見

語法方面出現(xiàn)的錯誤(Grammar)

1 for me————to me

2 the good score————a good score

表達部分存在的問題(Expression)

1 most importantly,that's because————more importantly,it is…

2 good proof to prove————proof

3 the hard work in my high school is deserved————the hard work in high school was rewarded

4 junior high————high school

5 tireless————tiresome

6 insisted————persevered

高頻話題高分口語模板

I still remember the day I got my college entrance exam result.That day is very special to me.Most importantly,it is proof that all the work in high school was rewarded.I have worked more than 15 hours a day in the last year of high-school.It was very tiresome and exhausting to me,but I persevered and I finally got a good score.What's mroe,I think it also means that I will have a very bright future,because I can go to the best university in our country,and that will give me a better chance to find a good job.

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