2018年gap year雅思作文范文賞析

2018年gap year雅思作文范文賞析

【考題解析】

考題重現(xiàn):In some countries, some high school leavers are choosing to work or travelfor a period of time before going to university. Discuss the advantages anddisadvantages of these school leavers' decisions. Give your opinion andreasons using your own experience.

核心詞匯:gap year = work or travel for a period of time before college

文章結(jié)構(gòu)：辯論型對稱式話題。

【9分范文】

Should students take a gap year before attending college or university? The “gap year” concept came in the decade following the Second World War when youth travel and cultural exchange were discussed amongst governments as a useful tool to create better intercultural understanding to prevent future global wars. These have been the two key elements in the gap year concept eversince-independent travel and volunteerism. Work travel appeared as a third key element with the introduction of student work visas in the 1980s.

On the positive side, a gap year enables students to realize their brave new dreams through their own activities. In other words, it is a fantastic chance for any young adult to fight for his own life for a year. In addition, it helps students who face certain economic constraints back home to earn a little extra money that they can spend on significant purchases. More importantly, throughout all these activities, one may discover the true value of one's life and learn more about oneself.After that, using his good judgment, he may step into the very way he should go for.

However, without parental guidance or school supervision, it is unimaginable to print the picture of their mass lives outside. Students may spend their year in parties and eat junk food.The fact that these young people lack life experience means that the gap year will inevitably be filled with ups and downs. Even worse, some of these young people may not have enough stamina to endure all the tests they will face, and will fail in their very first trials in life. However,even ending in failure, they can still learn much about how to live an independent life.

All in all, a gap year is still a meaningful way for students to integrate life experience into a modern education. It is of great importance to encourage these activities internationally, so long as students arc provided with effective and efficient supervision.

【范文譯文】

在上大學(xué)之前。學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該去嘗試休假學(xué)年呢？“休假學(xué)年”的概念來源于二戰(zhàn)之后的10年中。通過年輕人的旅行和文化交融在政府探討的方式來創(chuàng)造跨文化的理解交流，從而避免將來再發(fā)生全球戰(zhàn)爭。從那時起，“休假學(xué)年”的概念當(dāng)中就包含了兩層含義：自立旅行和志愿者精神。在20世紀(jì)80年代時。隨著學(xué)生工作簽證的出現(xiàn)。工作旅行賦予了“休假學(xué)年，第三層含義。

從積極影響來講。休假學(xué)年讓學(xué)生通過自身努力實現(xiàn)自己的夢想。換言之，對年輕人來說為了自己的生活打拼一年是個很難得的機(jī)會。此外，還可以幫助那些家中經(jīng)濟(jì)拮據(jù)的學(xué)生有筆額外收入，可以用來購買心儀的物品。更重要的是，通過這一系列活動，人可以發(fā)現(xiàn)生活的真正價值。從而更加了解自己。之后，以良好的自我辨別力。他可以從容走向社會。

然而，缺少父母引導(dǎo)和學(xué)校監(jiān)督，很難想象他們的生活將是怎樣的一番景象。他們很可能會靠開舞會或吃垃圾食品混日子。事實上，缺乏生活經(jīng)驗意味著休假學(xué)年不可避免地充滿了起伏跌宕。更糟的是，有些年輕人沒有足夠的毅力去忍受所面臨的種種考驗，從而在人生首次嘗試中失利。但是。就算失敗。他們也可從中學(xué)到很多有關(guān)獨立生活的知識。

總之，休假學(xué)年將人生經(jīng)歷和現(xiàn)代教育融合到一起，這對于學(xué)生來說很有意義。在給學(xué)生提供有效監(jiān)督的前提下，鼓勵國際間的相互活動極具重要性。

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