雅思小作文怎么寫(xiě)高分
2024-04-22 12:45:47 來(lái)源：中國(guó)教育在線
很多同學(xué)都很關(guān)注雅思小作文怎么寫(xiě)高分這個(gè)問(wèn)題，那么接下來(lái)就跟著中國(guó)教育在線小編一起來(lái)看看吧，相信你通過(guò)以下的文章內(nèi)容就會(huì)有更深入的了解。
雅思 小作文怎么寫(xiě)高分
很多同學(xué)可能對(duì)雅思小作文不太重視，甚至是對(duì)小作文根本不加練習(xí)，只關(guān)注大作文。這是一個(gè)誤區(qū)，因?yàn)樵谠u(píng)分中小作文畢竟有一定的比重，下面是小編搜集整理的關(guān)于雅思小作文怎么寫(xiě)高分的資料，歡迎查閱。
句式的掌握
小作文句式的背誦與掌握是非常重要的。舉個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的例子，比如說(shuō)我們想表達(dá)A在B方面從哪一年到哪一年急劇增長(zhǎng)，那么這個(gè)時(shí)候我們就需要牢牢記住我們至少可以用兩種句式來(lái)做，也就是一個(gè)是副詞修飾動(dòng)詞：A increased dramatically in B from …to …，另一個(gè)就是用名詞形式，我們用there be結(jié)構(gòu)：There was a marked growth in A from …to …
除此之外，我們?cè)诖笞魑漠?dāng)中用到的句式多樣性，在小作文當(dāng)中同樣使用，有的同學(xué)覺(jué)得小作文比較簡(jiǎn)單，字?jǐn)?shù)也不多，所以不假思索的全部用簡(jiǎn)單句來(lái)寫(xiě)，這同樣是不可取的。全部用簡(jiǎn)單句會(huì)給別人很急促、節(jié)奏太快的感覺(jué)，所以不論是大作文還是小作文我們都應(yīng)該長(zhǎng)句短句交替進(jìn)行。
寫(xiě)作的重點(diǎn)
小作文寫(xiě)什么，這是很多考生頭疼的一個(gè)問(wèn)題。題目中會(huì)有大量的數(shù)據(jù)，這個(gè)我們根據(jù)題目的要求去做是最直接的解決辦法。題目中會(huì)有這樣的要求：Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 也就是說(shuō)我們所需要寫(xiě)的是圖表的主要特點(diǎn)，另外再需要比較的地方就一定要進(jìn)行比較。掌握了這一點(diǎn)，再輔以我們的練習(xí)，我想在寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容和重點(diǎn)的選取上我們就不會(huì)有太大的問(wèn)題了。
數(shù)據(jù)的使用
小作文最明顯的一個(gè)特征就是在圖表型文章中會(huì)有大量的數(shù)據(jù)，我們除了要把它的主要特點(diǎn)趨勢(shì)寫(xiě)出來(lái)，還要注意數(shù)據(jù)的引入。因?yàn)檫@類(lèi)文章是說(shuō)明文，只有你自己的說(shuō)明文字，沒(méi)有相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)的引入，同樣顯得沒(méi)有生氣、缺乏說(shuō)服力。
段落的分配
很多同學(xué)小作文得6分可能不那么難，但是得6.5或7分就有很大的難度，筆者認(rèn)為段落的分配是起很大作用的，當(dāng)然要保證你在以上四點(diǎn)都有很好的表現(xiàn)。我們非常清楚，小作文主要分三部分：開(kāi)頭段、主體段、結(jié)尾段，這是一個(gè)大綱。在主體段部分，如果你能根據(jù)具體的圖表情況，把它有所組合，那么說(shuō)明你在分析題目、分析數(shù)據(jù)的能力上要?jiǎng)偃艘换I。也就是說(shuō)，你可以根據(jù)具體情況，把變化形勢(shì)相同或相近的放到一起去寫(xiě)，進(jìn)行重新組合，這樣的話，勝算就要大一些。
雅思寫(xiě)作有哪些失敗的開(kāi)頭
一、中式英文
典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.
二、用詞不當(dāng) 表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)
典型失敗案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
三、觀點(diǎn)模糊態(tài)度曖昧
典型失敗案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
四、偏離主題無(wú)軌電車(chē)
典型失敗案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
意思重復(fù)原地踏步
典型失敗案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
五、過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單沒(méi)有重點(diǎn)
典型失敗案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
雅思寫(xiě)作審題誤區(qū)
一、對(duì)雅思作文題目中的關(guān)鍵詞視而不見(jiàn)，憑想當(dāng)然
不少同學(xué)對(duì)題目沒(méi)仔細(xì)讀清楚，看漏了或者雖然看到但沒(méi)注意一些關(guān)鍵的字眼，而這些字眼往往是決定了文章的論述方向的?？忌跊](méi)考慮到這些字詞所規(guī)定的條件情況下，靠想當(dāng)然的按自己的一套下筆洋洋灑灑寫(xiě)下去，結(jié)果自然是離題了。
例如：
Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say it is a good thing, but other people think it can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
許多同學(xué)沒(méi)有扣住Air transport來(lái)議論，只是泛泛地說(shuō)增加出口(水果蔬菜)可帶來(lái)的益處，如創(chuàng)造外匯收入，促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，提高GDP云云。題目說(shuō)明了是Air transport，那就應(yīng)該重點(diǎn)從空運(yùn)被日益用來(lái)出口水果蔬菜的好處來(lái)論述，比如速度快了，最大限度地提高了保鮮程度，減少了腐爛變質(zhì)的損耗，讓商品的質(zhì)量更有保障，更好地滿足了進(jìn)口國(guó)消費(fèi)者的需求;
另外，空運(yùn)的運(yùn)輸訂單增多了，也促進(jìn)了航空業(yè)的興旺發(fā)展等等，這是贊同方的主要理由。而反對(duì)方的主要依據(jù)是空運(yùn)使運(yùn)輸成本大大升高，導(dǎo)致在當(dāng)?shù)氐牧闶蹆r(jià)會(huì)上升，這樣反而抑制了銷(xiāo)量;此外，空運(yùn)航班增多，增加了溫室氣體的排放，據(jù)估算，從新西蘭空運(yùn)水果去英國(guó)，每運(yùn)送一公斤，就要向大氣排放約相當(dāng)于5公斤的溫室氣體。像這樣按照題目所規(guī)定的條件和情況去論述，才能有的放矢，切中要害。
由此可見(jiàn)，要認(rèn)真審讀題目，特別注意那些關(guān)鍵詞，才能找對(duì)思路，針對(duì)性地答好題目。
二、對(duì)雅思作文題目不理解，領(lǐng)會(huì)不了其要旨
有時(shí)學(xué)生們對(duì)題目的每一個(gè)字都讀到了，且沒(méi)有不懂的單詞，但就是領(lǐng)會(huì)不了題目的意思，或者把題目理解錯(cuò)了，寫(xiě)下來(lái)自然是要偏題的。其原因往往是沒(méi)有把題目中各部分的關(guān)系整體地去想一想，缺乏用常識(shí)、事理以及邏輯去分析理解題目的習(xí)慣。
例如：Nowadays, technology developments are causing environmental problems. Many people think that we should live a simpler life while others believe that technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
許多同學(xué)對(duì)這道題不知從何入手，分析題目給出的兩種觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，繞來(lái)繞去半天，說(shuō)不到點(diǎn)子上。
雅思寫(xiě)作中怎樣使句型多樣化
在雅思寫(xiě)作學(xué)習(xí)當(dāng)中，最好的方法是以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句可長(zhǎng)可短，通常要加些附屬成分，如分詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、副詞短語(yǔ)、不定式動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，以及節(jié)縮成分?？傊?，雅思寫(xiě)作技巧作者可根據(jù)情況，使句子多樣化，使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個(gè)句子的基本概念一樣，但是句式不同，內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)也有些差別：
(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)
(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (現(xiàn)在分語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)+簡(jiǎn)單句)
(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副詞短語(yǔ)+并列分句(1)-(2) )
(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (簡(jiǎn)單句+形容語(yǔ)短語(yǔ))
(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副詞從句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最常見(jiàn)：如果加上其他三種互相交替，句子不是更多樣化嗎?
最后，看看這兩個(gè)句子要怎樣多樣化呢?
(6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.
(7) He felt very uneasy.
(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.
(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.
(c) The young pilot's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.
(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.
(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.
(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
(h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.
(i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.
(j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.
(k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.
(l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.
在上述12個(gè)句子中，(a)-(g)是簡(jiǎn)單句;
(h)是并列句;(i)-(l)是復(fù)雜句。
簡(jiǎn)單句除(b)和(g)之外，其他五樣，用的人并不多。人們最喜歡采用復(fù)雜句，尤其是(j)和(k)這兩款;接著便是并列句(h)。如果大多數(shù)人的句子只限于(b),(g),(h), (j)和(k)這五種，而其他的則棄如敝屣，不是很可惜。
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